COEUR CONSECRATION

Sure missed you around here and I love this poem. Now if you will please tell me without me having to look it up (lol) what (coeur) is..I have my ideas but I want to hear it from you. Your poetry has changed and changed very well I see. Kudos to this write gal and love seeing your face on here again. Great poem . darkly dashing:) Five stars and a Nom for you this morning. Keep up the good works Love and Peace at ya Mona xxxxxxoxoxo

or thought of Paris for some reason and oh how I love when a man can speak such loving frence...lol thank you for telling me that I love it!! You speak the language too?

I absolutely love this poem! It reminds me a lot - the style - of Mr Viggo Mortensen´s poetry. He is my favourite contemporary poet. He is a famous actor, but his talents are various, and his poetry is particularly amazing. And the writing style of this poem of yours truly reminds me of his. I say this in a positive way. One thing is to copy other authors and not be original at all, another thing is to have a writing style that resembles in some way other authors´work, but remains original. You should check out Mr Mortensen´s poetry. I believe you would fall in love...

brilliant ellie love judy xxx just one line that made me stumble - seems a bit short (just me) 'but the eyes brilliant' - what do you think of 'but brilliant eyes flicker'? http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

hi i to did not get some words on the first read but the comments always help nice read good theme always ,,,,,,,,,zigs

I loved this one ... I had a problem with the same line as Judd it just lost the flow there ... how about ... "but brilliant eyes reflect" if you want some more suggestions for that line I got a few ideas, great talking to you in chat last night was nice to get some chat time for a change love and hugs Jayne-Chloe ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

I remember the French word for heart from the movie "Titanic." Beautiful poem, with great energy and imagery. Favorite lines: Darkly dashing and self-effacing nonetheless he mines my passions like a tunneler possessed Always, Cat