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SOUTHERN SUMMER'S EVENING

The sun is setting 'hind the trees
  there's just the slightest hint of breeze
  the heat of day is finally passed
  this moment won't for too long last

Neighbor's grill is starting up
  they're having company to sup
  won't be long before the flavor
  of hamburgers they'll get to savor

A pair of doves I often see
  just lit for night in our pine tree
  don't even have to wait too long
  before they start their cooing song

Lightning bugs begin their flash
  and from the pond there comes a splash
  the bullfrogs start their old base song
  and bid tree peepers "sing along"

The suns now left behind red sky
  as darkness quickly becomes nigh
  the whippoorwill sings out its name
  in just three notes, always the same

A barred owl calls "who cooks for you?"
  declaring that the evenings through
  the bain of summer nights buzz by
  straight to a zapper(it'll fry)

Lets finish up our evening drink
  its time to go inside, I think
  the twilight has turned into dark
  I hear a far off 'coon dog bark

We stand as one, I turn and say
  "a perfect end to summer's day"
— scribbler, Jun 05, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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scribbler

16 years ago

evening

Thanks for taking time to read and comment.Even hottest days are bearable for a few moments in evening.......scribbler
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Scribbler

Your making me miss the summer ...sigh I love the heat it gets hot here lol love it ... beautiful summer poem ... well done love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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scribbler

16 years ago

summer

I've gotten to where I dread heat of summer,but not summer fashions HA!HA! thanks for stopping by and kind comments.....scribbler
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Geeze Stan..

Your verse just keeps blooming just like the summer’s day in this wonderful poem. It sure cheered me up no end. I could taste every experience. Thank you for my much needed day out in the sun...Brilliant Xena
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scribbler

16 years ago

summer's evening

thanks a lot,Zena.Support of friends here keeps me trying.Thanks for visit.....scribbler