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Jun 05, 2010
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Oh my Lover
Oh lover when I think of you
I tremble inside
i'm like a giddy school girl
I can't hide
You ignite such a passion in me
you say hallo
i'm in bits
You say good bye , feels like there will
never be another day
like the one you just gave me
Your in the rustle of leaves
the blades of grass
the coolness of the breeze
Your my first , my last
my inbetween thought
your my every move and breath
Oh my lover
I tremble inside
i'm like a giddy school girl
I can't hide
You ignite such a passion in me
you say hallo
i'm in bits
You say good bye , feels like there will
never be another day
like the one you just gave me
Your in the rustle of leaves
the blades of grass
the coolness of the breeze
Your my first , my last
my inbetween thought
your my every move and breath
Oh my lover
— lou, Jun 05, 2010
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Critiques
Moloko D. Mahuma
16 years ago
Beautiful
lou
16 years ago
Hi
hobo
16 years ago
Master of passion
lou
16 years ago
lol
loved
16 years ago
HELLO OR HALLO!!!!
lou
16 years ago
Lol
loved
16 years ago
*”You ignite such a
lou
16 years ago
Sorry........
loved
16 years ago
thanks
lou
16 years ago
hi
magics02
16 years ago
Nice one Lady Lou
lou
16 years ago
Lady mona
shirley harrison
16 years ago
lovely Lou!
lou
16 years ago
Dear Shirley
lou
16 years ago
Dear Indie