Esker

Jun 04, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Submerge

Down here with the feelings
the cool shades of ultraviolet
I feel sunpressed
the heat rises up like sea kelp
all the bright debris dancing
in the surf
currents lull

the liquid hope of the surface
twisting like my thoughts

I wish I was up there
I wish you were down here

but its broken this heart
and like bones that
cant heal

I bury you in sacred
dreams
and waits for nights cool
appeal

— Esker, Jun 04, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

Favorite Poets: Klo , .., Ida, .., Rhiannon1010, .., Pleiades, .., Valryianne, .., Ester, .., Stephanie, .., Emina Smajevic, ..., Elefentee, ..., Sommer Lyn, ..., Jasmine, ..., Rula, ...

Critiques

Esker

16 years 1 month ago

some errors here will fix them later

i'll do fine on my own healing basic ground pound opulent prowl and we wait for lightning and rain to soothe the thirst against dry fire of skins lust I just want to thank P for my latest writing drive Esker~

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Yes a couple of errors here

Nonetheless another great one of yours. I like it Mona

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Nice one Esker

He, he. You must have known I'd be here to read your wonderful poem. Xena

pleiades

16 years 1 month ago

how beautifulyour poetry

how beautiful your poetry unfurls... sometimes like a lazy cat stretching, and sometimes, as in this one, like a pair of gossamer wings your words carry the reader along with them a gentle journey of sad reflection, but also, with a sense of beauty, and maybe even hope... p

Esker

16 years 1 month ago

maybe even hope

rested of late feel up good about myself but tired off the cycle feed the addiction and hope is gone hope is empty no matter how much love is nearby or around just that serrated heart going round cutting all the strings and falling out into darkness today Im with hope its very sweet

raskin

16 years 1 month ago

Yes she is right about your

Yes she is right about your poetry unfurling. I have been under the cold water looking up at sunshine and moonlight. You have written it well. raskin

Restlesslittlesoul

16 years 1 month ago

Sublime!

Again, you are a true poet! This is exactly the kind of poetry I love! If you ever publish a poetry book, you can be sure I am going to buy a copy or more. For some reason, your poem made me think of this song that is heartwrenching to me. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fASJuCtBgrw http://restlesslittlesoul.webs.com

Esker

16 years 1 month ago

Maybe because of you I will publish

Your Poem "ant" is true poetry I hope my reply is fitting War is not the kind we fight ants are territorial but we are worse look at our world if ants were destroying there would be no place left there are so many of them compared and we are decimating the world while we have time left here I write I am so inpressed with your writing its been a long whle since I saw such passion thank god there are poets and thank god there are ants Your admiring poet freind Esker~

Restlesslittlesoul

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you...

SO much!!! But this is about you! And your poem that is brilliant! Did you watch the video and listened to the song? I think you will feel so deeply moved by it! I am profoundly in awe of your talent and your kindness! ana http://restlesslittlesoul.webs.com

Esker

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you Restlesslittlesoul

Did did watch and listen to this mans voice and music I am moved to be touched by a variant of music that I may never have found on my own Thank you for your Poetic eye and ear my freind Its always a joy to share with another artist Esker~

Join Neopoet to leave a critique

Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.

Join free Log in