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it sounds like 'i love you...'

I tell you in idol chat
of men and Gods
‘I am curious’
Fumbling about dusty ruins
of thoughts and desire I am as a child in these things
playing foolishly with words
I should never utter
and puzzled you say I am
‘Uneducated, yet so full’ Did you see me then?
Between your keys and sheets
where we first
made love? When you laid the moon
down at my feet
and wiping the dripping stars
from my brow
you named me
Sonata
     
— theladyblue, Jun 04, 2010

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theladyblue

theladyblue

16 years ago

Sorry

for the constant revisions...for some reason my spacing is having an issue...it still looks funny but ill leave it for now. <3 Emarie "i read you and see…that between the pen, paper and you…there is little room for me…" ~ heart breaker~ Go Live & Get Rewarded!!! Check us out at http://www.neopoet.com/forum/20761 & the Community Calender!!!
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Restlesslittlesoul

15 years 11 months ago

WOW!

That´s all I can say right now! http://restlesslittlesoul.webs.com