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A Hobo's Love Life

I saw her from across the room
She stole my heart
And took my breath away
Her smile
The twinkle in her eye
The way she seemed
To dance across the room
Instead of walking
Like the rest of us

I never believed in
Love at first sight
But she was perfect in every way
As quickly as this butterfly
Fluttered into my life
She flew away
Now I know
I will never love like this again

Hold on a minute
Wait just a second
Did that lady over there
Smile at me

I’m in love again
Third time today

— hobo, Jun 04, 2010

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hobo

hobo

16 years ago

I'm back again

hello my friends, I am back again for a few days. it is good to be back. after I get a little sleep I will get back to commenting Randy
lou

lou

16 years ago

Fickle Romantic

Beautiful poem until you screw her over , typical man LOL love lou xx
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

Do you get whiplash

Do you get whiplash often? Adore this poem, Hobo. You bum you. lol. ~A "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Hobo

cheeky devil I loved this one brava :) love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Typical of you dear Hobo...

To speak all lovely and romantic and then finish with a cracker of an ending...You little Devil. Xena
loved

loved

16 years ago

This happpens

.... All the time To most of us Teenagers every day. You just have to smile And then fly away And the next guy in queue Is now loosening his By the way
E

esperanza

16 years ago

oh

sorry no change xD
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

oh i so love this randy

'Third time today' brought back memories of youth such a fun write of the best calibre. love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
SH

shirley harrison

16 years ago

L:O:L

you are a smoothie! i really like this but if you were my boyfriend i would have to club you with a courgette! L:O:L ggggrrrrrrrrrr shirley harrison
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

LOL

Shirley your as mad as a sack of rabbits , what are you like ? hehe well done hobo lou xx