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Jun 04, 2010
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A Hobo's Love Life
I saw her from across the room
She stole my heart
And took my breath away
Her smile
The twinkle in her eye
The way she seemed
To dance across the room
Instead of walking
Like the rest of us
I never believed in
Love at first sight
But she was perfect in every way
As quickly as this butterfly
Fluttered into my life
She flew away
Now I know
I will never love like this again
Hold on a minute
Wait just a second
Did that lady over there
Smile at me
I’m in love again
Third time today
— hobo, Jun 04, 2010
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Critiques
hobo
16 years ago
I'm back again
magics02
16 years ago
Good to have you back Mr Romance
lou
16 years ago
Fickle Romantic
Kailashana
16 years ago
Do you get whiplash
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Hobo
xena465
16 years ago
Typical of you dear Hobo...
loved
16 years ago
This happpens
esperanza
16 years ago
oh
judyanne
16 years ago
oh i so love this randy
shirley harrison
16 years ago
L:O:L
lou
15 years 11 months ago
LOL