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turning the key, making amends to the sunrise

we make love
before the sunrise,
you and I,
I feel your presence even now, 
my Beloved,

Joe writes a poem
about God's middle finger
and the Rachael Corrie is on her way

between the rage of a poet
to bear witness and the question
what then is love,
is a key, turning...
the lathe of heaven
is a sickle of death
and so it is written
one heart lost in the desert
is the last just man walking
on earth
 
blood and oil spill, bullets and bread do not mix,
human misery breeds contempt, mob rules the mind;
love forsakes all, is never forsaken;
for every olive tree
that is planted on judgment day 
when even poetry has died, the earth shall flourish
in a dove's cry and hawks will soar
over the ruins of angry men.




— Kailashana, Jun 04, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

That’s cause the coin is

That's cause the coin is still spinning on its side. ;-) ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
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Arrow

16 years ago

Is the lathe of Heaven

an oil drill? I suspect not. Is the progeny of making love with the Beloved an olive tree? I suspect so. What can we do besides plant our trees and bear witness? This reminds me of an interview with a monk who opined that when he thought there was no more love in him, somewhere there was more and that was the mystery.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

Thank you Arrow for reading

Thank you Arrow for reading and commenting. My prayer and hope is that the world is like the monk you write of..and that this newly found love is the answer we've been seeking. *The lathe of heaven* actually refers to a book of the same name by Ursula Le Guin. "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
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Arrow

16 years ago

I've only read one of her books--

The Tombs of Atuan but liked it quite a bit. I'll have to check that out - thanks. There are a lot of allusions here; you're demanding a lot from your reader. That's a good thing.
BW

Bluesky Woman

16 years ago

love forsakes all, is never forsaken.

Anna, this is a powerful piece of work. thank you for offering it to us. Love and death...two sides of the same coin, yes.. Leigh "The true miracle is not walking on water or walking in air, but simply walking on this earth." Thich Nhat Hanh
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

Love you my Anna:-

Ann of Norway You set the bees among the flowers buzzing through the thoughts and turning the key into the pacifying probe that revolves the meanings of force and power, that of ecstasy and death, that of war and destruction, that of love and the everlasting joy of enlightenment, the continuous renewal. Ann.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

“the everlasting joy of

"the everlasting joy of enlightenment, the continuous renewal." Mmmmmmm. ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
M

magics02

16 years ago

Very nice

I really liked this one and caught our dear Longo in here also as the key forever opening forever locking. Good one Kail Mona xoxox
S

scribbler

16 years ago

sunrise

Very powerful.Especially liked images in last verse......scribbler
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Mum

I left a comment here last night or thought I did ... nominated and just ... sigh sigh sigh love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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Dalton

16 years ago

One heart lost in the

One heart lost in the desert is the last just man walking on earth... beautiful words, I wish I'd written them. john x "If God Lived On Earth People Would Break His Windows"