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Jun 04, 2010
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Hearts Souls Dreams
Feeling's You can't afford to give
for the thoughts of others
you must not live
think of life as if forever
and of yourself
and your own endeavors
in these words
burn a passing life
swirled as scattered birds
hush the hearts listening
roaming near these truths
lost in an aurora of glistening
held now by heaven's army
guarded by the souls of destiny
who will never harm me
truly has one given back
to fill this hole in passing
before once bridged a gap
now we rule in joy's harmonic
warm the chill of hearts now
stand to play our own symphonic
for the thoughts of others
you must not live
think of life as if forever
and of yourself
and your own endeavors
in these words
burn a passing life
swirled as scattered birds
hush the hearts listening
roaming near these truths
lost in an aurora of glistening
held now by heaven's army
guarded by the souls of destiny
who will never harm me
truly has one given back
to fill this hole in passing
before once bridged a gap
now we rule in joy's harmonic
warm the chill of hearts now
stand to play our own symphonic
— mantiscepter, Jun 04, 2010
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xena465
16 years ago
Great write John
mantiscepter
16 years ago
Hey there
mantiscepter
16 years ago
Hey there
Seren
16 years ago
Dear John
mantiscepter
16 years ago
H. S. D.
xena465
16 years ago
Tut tut..
mantiscepter
16 years ago
TOGETHER