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Hearts Souls Dreams

 Feeling's You can't afford to give
for the thoughts of others
 you must not live

think of life as if forever
and of yourself 
and your own endeavors 

in these words
burn a passing life
swirled as  scattered birds

hush the hearts listening
roaming near these truths
lost in an aurora of glistening

held now by heaven's army
guarded by the souls of destiny
who will never harm me

truly has one given  back
to fill this hole in passing
before once  bridged  a gap

 now we rule in joy's harmonic
warm the chill of  hearts now
stand to play our own symphonic
— mantiscepter, Jun 04, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Great write John

I love these lines... now we rule in joy’s harmonic warm the chill of hearts now stand to play our own symphonic Xena (Mrs John from Scotland x)
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Hey there

you and Seren have each others response. I still have problems. but I will live so I will here and now say thanx Seren for the read and was good to hear from you. thank for the kind words and quit laughing at me. I will figure it out one day LOve JOhn
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Hey there

you and Seren have each others response. I still have problems. but I will live so I will here and now say thanx Seren for the read and was good to hear from you. thank for the kind words and quit laughing at me. I will figure it out one day LOve JOhn
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear John

lovely lovely poem and I loved that last verse its really special ... thanks for sharing this one my friend I am always happy to find one of yours love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

H. S. D.

Well hello again I see your scottish now Maybe I should change. Or get it right the first time. so A line you liked shined, and made you happy ..... that makes me happy. was just teasing I should Know who I married>>>> thank you for reading and having fun with me. John The american:[ Love ya.
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Tut tut..

Only just married too!!! Ha, ha, Xena