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Jun 04, 2010
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My Immortality
My soul, my spirit,
My immortality,
Past all the years and ages,
Will be what remains of me,
The being beneath the surface,
Of an ever aging face,
The entity within the eyes,
That behold my lover's grace,
The ghost I give up,
When my time is done,
Shall move into a brighter day,
In the presence of the Son,
For I know more,
Pertains to me,
Beyond flesh and bone,
My immortality,
I searched here for an answer,
And found it, you see,
The reason my spirit outlasts this body,
The purpose for, my immortality,
Is to fellowship,
And abide with my Lord,
It is this blessing,
I was created for,
So when I am gone,
Do not weep for me,
For He has prepared a place,
And there I shall be,
Always and forever,
For all eternity,
It is Jesus who secures the existence,
Of my immortality,
Through His gift and my acceptance,
I was guaranteed,
Blessed passage into His kingdom,
The heaven awaiting, my immortality.
My immortality,
Past all the years and ages,
Will be what remains of me,
The being beneath the surface,
Of an ever aging face,
The entity within the eyes,
That behold my lover's grace,
The ghost I give up,
When my time is done,
Shall move into a brighter day,
In the presence of the Son,
For I know more,
Pertains to me,
Beyond flesh and bone,
My immortality,
I searched here for an answer,
And found it, you see,
The reason my spirit outlasts this body,
The purpose for, my immortality,
Is to fellowship,
And abide with my Lord,
It is this blessing,
I was created for,
So when I am gone,
Do not weep for me,
For He has prepared a place,
And there I shall be,
Always and forever,
For all eternity,
It is Jesus who secures the existence,
Of my immortality,
Through His gift and my acceptance,
I was guaranteed,
Blessed passage into His kingdom,
The heaven awaiting, my immortality.
— shane, Jun 04, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years ago
Dear Shane
magics02
16 years ago
Splendidly written
shane
16 years ago
Thank You