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What Is Sin?
MY THANKS AND APPRECIATION TO ALL THOSE WHO HAVE CONTRIBUTED IN THE EDIT SO FAR
This poem is my personal opinion and has no bearing on anyone.
Please read it compassionately and independently
What is sin? ...............Part The First
The freedom of speech
In this poetic site
Permits me to voice
myself freely,
So I thought about
Sinning,
As today’s theme
MAIN POEM
What then is Sin?
Not to kiss is
Not to look into one’s eyes
While speaking is
Not to fuck when the desire exists
of course is
Not to hold hands
when you should
Or must is sinful
When you look over your spouse’s shoulders
into another’s eyes is it not?
To circumcise is the biggest one,
Not to masturbate
and relieve one is master of all
Not to divorce, when there is need,
Is a big deal
To have sex
behind the spouse’s back
or when committed is an
absolutely absolute no, no
And
last of all
I‘d like to say
Keep religion as personal
Never sin...
Let each one follow
Budhism,
Christianity,
Hinduism
Islamism
Sikhism
Scientiologism,
gayism,
lesbianism
and
Any other ism
that has yet to seed,
We must not err in these.
Last but not the least
Is the mother of all?
Not to be at peace with oneself
As one desires
And
Has a mind
For not to please one’s mind
Is the father of all?
Sin of sins!!!
Critiques
Hooded Stranger
16 years ago
What IS reallly SIN?
loved
16 years ago
I have achieved
Hooded Stranger
16 years ago
Well I didn't actually read...
loved
16 years ago
please avoid my page
Hooded Stranger
16 years ago
This is a workshop!
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years ago
My regrets to AEC
Jonathan Moore
16 years ago
Block PMs
loved
16 years ago
thanks
Hooded Stranger
16 years ago
loved
loved
16 years ago
I am
xena465
16 years ago
Strong stuff Loved
loved
16 years ago
thanks
loved
16 years ago
silence is gold
loved
16 years ago
i am
lou
16 years ago
Sin
loved
16 years ago
thanks
loved
16 years ago
redrafted
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Hello Loved
loved
16 years ago
could you please
arja
16 years ago
:) this is great read (the
loved
16 years ago
thanks