You Don't Know Me! has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

You Don't Know Me!
Has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/you-dont-know-me-7/

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Jun 03, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Donnie

A self-reflective piece. I found it engaging and fluid. I was hooked from the very first line. My favorite lines: I once was a saint twas clear Never an ouce of fear Not even a twicth until that bitch Gutted and deveined me; design for her dinner And me thinking I was the winner What did she think You may want to check for spelling errors. Always, Cat

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 1 month ago

Hey Thanks Cat, I need all the help and reminding I can get.

When I am at the Berry I have all the access to what I need, but for fear of not being able to get back on line my works suffer. And If I don't get close enough with my spelling our spell checker can't help me De-veined was a hard one I thought I spelled it right, but I suck at spelling all around. I need a personal editor I guess. Thanks for making me recheck the spellings I am trying to purify my writes But hey. Arg! Thanks again Donnie/Sinbad Those were mine too! My favorite lines from you was to recheck the spelling thanks for engaging the write, glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing this one too, Thanks again Donnie/Sinbad

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Hey Donnie

This is great news! Congratulations! Always, Cat

poewriter58

16 years ago

Hey Cat

Meet a very good friend of mine Donnie Berris Donnie---Cat Cat--- Donnie Donnie Cat is one of my dearest friends I love her to pieces Chrys

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years ago

Hello Kitty Cat Lol I've seen her here around the block.

Are we a little bored tonight Chrys I just can't sleep I have an all day family reunion to go to and I must rely on a ride so don't know how or if I am getting home tonight when my ride leaves, I know she'll want to go before I do.Donnie/Sinbad the Sailor Man Have you seen this yet it is a Gravatar. http://en.gravatar.com/thesinbadthesailorman Copy past this link into your browser and it takes you to a single place marker with buttons to most of my sites.

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