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Jun 03, 2010
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Red
He was the good son,
and brother, as well
with a hunger for living
he couldn't quite quell;
living for family
'til he sent them, away...
my friend, Red....can't come out to play.
~
Tortured, in life
but, still wore a smile
that would put you in, awe
but, that was Red's style,
a teacher, a mentor,
a student of the day;
Red's hope began slipping, away.
~
All I can remember
is, he'd never condone,
even his behaviour
for leaving his family, alone;
he would've straightened things out
had he just one more day,
and that's something, my friend "Red", would say.
— docmaverick, Jun 03, 2010
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Critiques
scribbler
16 years ago
red
docmaverick
16 years ago
Thanks, Scribbler....
Moloko D. Mahuma
16 years ago
It is so beautiful
docmaverick
16 years ago
Thank-you, Moloko....
Antoinette Mar…
16 years ago
Red...
magics02
16 years ago
Doc
docmaverick
16 years ago
I greatly appreciate your support, Mona....
magics02
16 years ago
Doc
magics02
16 years ago
Thanks Doc
weirdelf
16 years ago
you just had to slip in to the second person
docmaverick
16 years ago
Hey elf....
weirdelf
16 years ago
you beauty! Now a fine poem indeed.
docmaverick
16 years ago
Elf....