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The Hummingbird

Once I saw a hummingbird,
Buzzing around a tree,
He was singing a little tune,
As happy as can be.

I said to him "Mr. Hummingbird,"
Do you wish to fly up high,
And be like the golden eagles,
Who soar throughout the sky?"

He stopped what he was doing,
And said, "Tell me why I should,
When the eagles cannot sing like me,
I'm the best throughout the wood."

"Yes I said, that is great,
But the eagles are so grand,
They get to glide above the sky,
Guardians of all the land."

The hummingbird shook his head,
"My sweet music fills the air,
I bring happiness to those who are sad,
My song, I love to share."

I looked at this tiny bird,
No longer did he seem so small,
The pride he felt for who he was,
Made him the grandest bird of all.


— greeneyes, Jun 03, 2010

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

lovely

the other person's grass is not always greener (x) love it judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Elizabeth

Your narrative skills are awesome I so wish you would try your hand at a book I believe you have something in writes like this one ... big smile much love JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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wolf

16 years ago

Your poems remind me of a

Your poems remind me of a friend of mine's, Emily, her's have the same captivity, really nice poem.