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brittle light
brittle light
Jun 03, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

when all is said and done


I lost the path last evening's saunter
and pondered past the seasoned stars
all were named "all the same"
hence I wander whence I came
— brittle light, Jun 03, 2010

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Welcome to Neo BL

So much said in so few words...Wonderful. Xena
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

I've read your 3 postings so far

and love them all. Check out chuck (barbsdad2003), you will find a poet who shares your intimacy with words and whimsy. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

p.s. with people I know well and know me

I never give stars, the comments are all. 4 to me means great, as it says, 5 shakes my world view of poetry or meaning, it is very rare. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,

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