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mantiscepter
Jun 02, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sentiment

 Have I missed
something in this life

the sweet smell of a rose
the kiss of a wife

is it for me to find 
or will the world to me

be unkind?
— mantiscepter, Jun 02, 2010

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magics02

16 years ago

She is out there Manti

Short, sweet and to the point on this one. Good going my friend and go out tomorrow pick you a rose and give it to a stranger, a woman that is. Let me know how that one works. And don't forget to kiss it first before you hand it to her. I shall await your response to let me know how you did. I like this one:) Mona xoxoxo I forgot, how about the ending sounding like this...(be so unkind?) Just a thought.
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Sweet

Just like You my Dear Mona.. straight to the point. glad to hear you liked it. I believe all writing should be welcome, thoughts observations and poetry alike, we should reveal.... John..thanks again.
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magics02

16 years ago

Well I was hoping

You delivered the rose to the stranger today and was awaiting the reply. You know guy I love ya!! Keep up your progress it is good!! Until then next time:) Mona xoxoxo
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Thanks

Hi Mona your too kind, and I love to hear what you have to say, any time. life is a stranger to all, veiled or unveiled., the pursuit is ours to choose. John
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Alike

I write beautiful little gems like this ' for all the beautiful gems out on the site like you.. Thanks Elizabeth, really good to hear from you Love to all. John
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Poetry

Thanks Rosco ,nice to see ya out here I'm John. and thanks for your agreeing to agree.. thanks again and hope to see you out on the site. Mantiscepter
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Nice one John

I'll be your UK wife from afar...If you'll have me? A wee hug and a big X from... Mrs John. Xena
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Sentiment

Ah, A woman from my own roots, My Mum was born in London and lived in yorkshire ,leeds area. a special kind of woman,there in the UK so I do send some big Hugs back to you Xena, Lots of Love John.
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear John

I am sometimes late like the white rabbit but I always get there lol eventually wonderful poem you say so very much in so few lines love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Lovely

Hello my lady and how are you this fine evening? always happy when you stop to chat and read. I sure hope all is well and send my warmest regards to you and your beautiful Family. your never late and I will always await your call.. Love John. [ Less is sometimes more.]
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

i love this

so few words that say so much and reflect what many others also feel love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

HI

Thanks for your words of kindness, and I did find your ad and read it I don't, or can't understand what it would possibly be like to lose a child, my sympathies and prayers with you. and thanks for the read glad you liked it. PS I did keep the http: so I can pass this on. Mantiscepter