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Call Of The Wild.......for V, and my blue eyed wolf

Call of the Wild

She nuzzled him
his scent, a mix of odors

something long dead..
something freshly killed..
fish???

mingled with animal magnetism

She nuzzled him once again..

 "cold nose," he said

  her response;

"Warm heart."

— jetz, Jun 02, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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magics02

16 years ago

Jetz

Great play on words here. Reminds me of a wolf calling in the wild for his prey. This is freeform at it's best. Good write gal Love,Mona xoxo
jetz

jetz

16 years ago

Patrick, As you well know, I

Patrick, As you well know, I threw the fish in there for you!!!! Anything for you dear heart!!! Roasted swine is a given!! ^(..)^ love your accent!!! yours, foreva me
jetz

jetz

16 years ago

Good call Mona. You

Good call Mona. You responded before I added the last half of the title. A wolf indeed. Thanks for the read and reply. Sue
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wolf

16 years ago

Beautiful, I’m not always

Beautiful, I'm not always that fond of free verse, but this was excellent, very imaginary descriptions.
jetz

jetz

16 years ago

Hi Wolf, First, Welcome to

Hi Wolf, First, Welcome to the site!!!! I'm not very comfortable writing free verse myself, but, sometimes shit happens! Glad you liked it. I see you have made a few posts. I look foward to reading your work. Thanks! Sue
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hippiepoet69

15 years 11 months ago

Smells of the wild

and of the hot and sticky southern summers. 5 menutes outside and I smell like that. Take Care. huey