Call Of The Wild.......for V, and my blue eyed wolf

Call of the Wild

She nuzzled him
his scent, a mix of odors

something long dead..
something freshly killed..
fish???

mingled with animal magnetism

She nuzzled him once again..

"cold nose," he said

her response;

"Warm heart."

— jetz, Jun 02, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

Critiques

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Jetz

Great play on words here. Reminds me of a wolf calling in the wild for his prey. This is freeform at it's best. Good write gal Love,Mona xoxo

jetz

16 years 1 month ago

Patrick, As you well know, I

Patrick, As you well know, I threw the fish in there for you!!!! Anything for you dear heart!!! Roasted swine is a given!! ^(..)^ love your accent!!! yours, foreva me

jetz

16 years 1 month ago

Good call Mona. You

Good call Mona. You responded before I added the last half of the title. A wolf indeed. Thanks for the read and reply. Sue

wolf

16 years 1 month ago

Beautiful, I’m not always

Beautiful, I'm not always that fond of free verse, but this was excellent, very imaginary descriptions.

jetz

16 years 1 month ago

Hi Wolf, First, Welcome to the site!!!! I'm not very comfortable writing free verse myself, but, sometimes shit happens! Glad you liked it. I see you have made a few posts. I look foward to reading your work. Thanks! Sue

hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Smells of the wild

and of the hot and sticky southern summers. 5 menutes outside and I smell like that. Take Care. huey

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