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Jun 02, 2010
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Your Lovelier Poem
Your Lovelier Poem
Poems are uniquely different
As much as are one’s jeans
But the adorable beauty
Is written in the beholder’s genes
Who transforms thus,
In between
Your poem
Was utter delicious cream?
Mine was good, palatable
Like a flowing water stream.
When two poets meet
Life ensues
As if in total extreme
To give way to the deserved
Is ah! Gentlest
Some want to always affront
That’s just because
They’re incapable of being upfront.
Shallow, is all I’d say!
Have a lovely feast enjoy
Your success today
I may come by
Another lovely summer’s day
— loved, Jun 02, 2010
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lou
16 years ago
Taking a Pop
loved
16 years ago
THANKS
xena465
16 years ago
Nice Loved
loved
16 years ago
thanks for