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Your Lovelier Poem

Your  Lovelier Poem


Poems are uniquely different

As much as are one’s jeans

But the adorable beauty

Is written in the beholder’s genes

Who transforms thus,

In between

 

Your poem

Was utter delicious cream?

Mine was good, palatable

Like a flowing water stream.

When two poets meet

Life ensues

As if in total extreme

 

To give way to the deserved

Is ah! Gentlest

Some want to always affront

That’s just because

They’re incapable of being upfront.

Shallow, is all I’d say!

Have a lovely feast enjoy

Your success today

I may come by

Another lovely summer’s day

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, Jun 02, 2010

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Country/Region: ROU

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lou

lou

16 years ago

Taking a Pop

a judgmental theme, but the poem speaks the truth. love lou xx
loved

loved

16 years ago

THANKS

I appreciate your raw truth please do permit me to write a poem on and for you as i have just posted a comment in my blog for MA'AM ANN OF NORWAY thanks
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Nice Loved

Our poems are our own to express how we feel. It's good to help each other to improve our writes. I love the first stanza best too. Xena
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks for

...liking and commenting on my poems thanks