Redemption

poetry isnt always flawless in the flow, like humans it sometimes should be staggering to slow the pace of the read down, I will work on this one I wrote this a long time ago, well half of it, the later half came recently JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

thanks for the read hun and it is dark, its about the different ways we can deal with the spectre hanging over our heads, death love and hugs Jayne-Ch,oe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Since november last year I have written wholey in blank verse/freeform I dont know what you mean to be honest your message confused me a tad lol to be totally honest with you I am more comfortable these days writing in blank verse ... I hope you get time to read my next because you and another poet inspired it (hugs) love JayCee big smile x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

John I am a singer/teacher so the rhythm and rhyme come natural for me the real challenge is writing in blank verse haiku just finished 10 haiku's and I am going to post them as one poem when I edit out the gremlins love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

I watched a docoumentary about Nelson Mandela .. that man sacrificed so much to end the conflict of his country .. I dont think I have ever been more inspired in my life ... his reading for 27 years of one poem to keep strong ? was for me like epiphany, sometimes you can't see the forest for the tree's and I loose myself in my own troubles ... after surfacing from a deep dive ... I have come up for air ... and the apple never falls far from the tree ;) the tree no matter how far is still home big hugs and much love JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

I usually wait a week or so before I do an edit ... I will have a tweak of this one later on and I know it needs a few tweaks its a little different rhyme for me and I enjoyed the challenge of lengthening my lines :) love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Your close Xena ... and your meanings totally valid as well as is any readers ... its something we all have to face death ... and how we tackle that death ... seeing it as an enemy ? or just another link in the circle of life ... I dont know hun I am still learning for myself lol and I thank you for the wonderful comment love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

thanks for that kind compliment, I am still learning and will be learning till the end but I am always glad when my friends like my poetry this was an experiment with longer lines as you know I usually write in much shorter lines ... I thought it was time to try something different love and big hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

My Nan used the word cackle a lot lol and I dont even know where it come from sometimes I just write and the words fall out of the pen ... and that line sigh ... you know what that line means more than most ... btw I am ordering my copy of your book tomorrow I just had a read of your link love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Damo we have a flood warning for our area its pouring down rain its miserable up here we are getting the ass end of the supercell that was up the coast and hit Lennox Head today thanks for the comment this was very staccato thanks for picking that up :) love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Got stuck in for a day but other than that we came through it fairly unscathed ...lol I thought I lived over gods back fence smile, it is gods country in these parts only three hours north of you near the brothers lol ;) love and hugs JayCee x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)