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stereo wars - feel my pain

her chaps left her
or her lover

baby daddy
live in loafer

and her she comes

dumdidum 321
its Mariah
wailing her way thru

this beaut

of an afternoon
 

if i were her

it would be Mary J
 

feeeeel myyyyy payayaaaaaaiiiin


and if i were me
id slap myself

then put on


Where did you sleep last night
not to be confused with
In the pines

but todays Stereo war
which im destined to lose

on the basis of sound quality
not the quality of sound
or pomposity
take this Django
take this Grappeli
take this Jimi
and for the grande finale
the bassiest Bassline 4X4

the poor mistreated Laptop will allow
 

 

Fuck em

— billy bilo, Jun 02, 2010

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yenti

yenti

15 years 11 months ago

Stereo

Well this sounds old but I guess I will survive, this piece needs a few tidy edits to let it flow and not to let it sound more like a blog of protest, otherwise the basic poem should come out great, Yours Ian.T