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Chela

 

Feel first moment through still breath of meditation.

Beyond grey emotion find white emanation

and understanding we cause all of creation

as we co-operate in participation

to bring forth a mystery we have forgotten.

 

Performing alone in manifest repartee

often astray from our part of the symphony.

So drift on soft breath and through white-wax harmony

perceive bliss, rapture beyond golden alchemy.

To seek, not escape; recognise there is reason.

 

Put aside pure logic and bold intelligence.

Encompass the spirit of life’s major essence.

 

— judyanne, Jun 02, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

The alchemy of reason!

Ann of Norway You cause creation, into your white and light the alchemy of reason, with your white-wax harmonies part of life's orchestrated symphony, yet experiencing the essence of meditation for your spirit. Clawing at reality. I feel in a veiled golden paradise, that I cannot see, but which if I am totally still, I shall be able to see!! Magical this is. Just me judyanne, with my love annanya glad to see you here.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

annanya xxx

thank you will be in touch soon xxx love judyanne ttp://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Judd

Your headed in a wonderful direction ... I love your surrel poems they are just getting better love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thank you jc

it needs some tweaks as i was writing it for a competition that exists now only in akasha - last year's june comp i believe (duh) and i was a little constricted in the flow by having to fit to a form. will work on it i think love across the nulla (((hug))) hope you're well hun love judd xx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks indi

does that show, do you think, the importance of the title? interesting, thank you and thanks for visiting, and there is more out and in there than anyone can imagine dale (x) love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Judy

Superb. I love the flow...Shame it missed the competition. Xena
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks rosina

it didn't just miss the competition - it circumnavigated it !! i feel such a dork - i put it in under the competition number and all !! never mind - this happens as we age. love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

He, he, Judy

Age!!! Tell me about it??? But then in my case that's just an excuse. My teachers at school were always shouting at me “Pay attention”, and I didn’t even know they were shouting at me! I was always away in my own wee world until they smacked me with a ruler or belt, to bring me back into the classroom. Xena
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

rolling on the floor rosina

you sound just like my sister, bless her. lol (((smiling still))) judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

rolling on the floor rosina

you sound just like my sister, bless her. lol (((smiling still))) judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html