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Jun 02, 2010
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Chela
Feel first moment through still breath of meditation.
Beyond grey emotion find white emanation
and understanding we cause all of creation
as we co-operate in participation
to bring forth a mystery we have forgotten.
Performing alone in manifest repartee
often astray from our part of the symphony.
So drift on soft breath and through white-wax harmony
perceive bliss, rapture beyond golden alchemy.
To seek, not escape; recognise there is reason.
Put aside pure logic and bold intelligence.
Encompass the spirit of life’s major essence.
— judyanne, Jun 02, 2010
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Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
The alchemy of reason!
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
annanya xxx
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you jc
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks indi
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks rosina
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
He, he, Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
rolling on the floor rosina
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
rolling on the floor rosina
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