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I am free

I am free
Sonnet 13

I am soaring like an eagle in the Savannah skies.I am shining like a star on the blanket of night.I am sweet like a honey-bee in a buzzing hive.I am humble like a granule of sugar in a sugar bowl. I am peaceful like the stroke of midnight.I am subservient like a tea-lady.I am focused like lenses on zoom.I am bold like a feather on a peacock’s tail. I am thorough like an analyst reconciling facts.I am bright like sunrays breaking through trees.I am vibrating high like a flower about to blossom.I am light like the morning misty breeze. I am ripe like a tomato ready for the pickingI am free...By: Qnozz 
— Qnozz, Jun 02, 2010

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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

free

not a great fan of most free form, but loved the visuals and ease of read in this work........scribbler
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Beautiful, exquisitely

Beautiful, exquisitely freeing poem. Welcome. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

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