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Jun 01, 2010
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EASY CHOICES
The song of the birds
the buzz of the bees
both these observed
while walking 'mongst trees
Roar of the traffic
blare of a horn
sounds of a city
on any day's morn
Trickling music
from a tiny brook
out there in the country
if we only look
The jostle of people
on crowded sidewalk
all pushing and shoving
while trying to talk
The sweet honeysuckle
with it's heady smell
insinuates nostrils
throughout the dell
The smell of a sewer
and three day old trash
as sharp as a skewer
an olfactory crash
A soft sylvan landscape
sun-dappled by leaves
or sage softly rolling
from light midday breeze
Hard unfiltered sun
in black parking lot
makes sweat run like rivers
its so stinking hot
The scurry of squirrel
the flash of a deer
if careful and stealthy
both can be seen here
The slink of a housecat
grey blur of a rat
most you can hope for
when town's where you're at
With all of these choices
I think you'd concur
to live in the country
is what I prefer
the buzz of the bees
both these observed
while walking 'mongst trees
Roar of the traffic
blare of a horn
sounds of a city
on any day's morn
Trickling music
from a tiny brook
out there in the country
if we only look
The jostle of people
on crowded sidewalk
all pushing and shoving
while trying to talk
The sweet honeysuckle
with it's heady smell
insinuates nostrils
throughout the dell
The smell of a sewer
and three day old trash
as sharp as a skewer
an olfactory crash
A soft sylvan landscape
sun-dappled by leaves
or sage softly rolling
from light midday breeze
Hard unfiltered sun
in black parking lot
makes sweat run like rivers
its so stinking hot
The scurry of squirrel
the flash of a deer
if careful and stealthy
both can be seen here
The slink of a housecat
grey blur of a rat
most you can hope for
when town's where you're at
With all of these choices
I think you'd concur
to live in the country
is what I prefer
— scribbler, Jun 01, 2010
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Seren
16 years ago
Dear Scribbler
scribbler
16 years ago
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greeneyes
16 years ago
Beautifully written!
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16 years ago
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Roscoe Lane
16 years ago
Quite a contrast,
scribbler
16 years ago
dhoices
magics02
16 years ago
Hey Scribe
scribbler
16 years ago
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magics02
16 years ago
What I really
scribbler
16 years ago
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