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EASY CHOICES

The song of the birds
  the buzz of the bees
  both these observed
  while walking 'mongst trees

Roar of the traffic
  blare of a horn
  sounds of a city
  on any day's morn

Trickling music
  from a tiny brook
  out there in the country
  if we only look

The jostle of people
  on crowded sidewalk
  all pushing and shoving
  while trying to talk

The sweet honeysuckle
  with it's heady smell
  insinuates nostrils
  throughout the dell

The smell of a sewer
  and three day old trash
  as sharp as a skewer
  an olfactory crash

A soft sylvan landscape
  sun-dappled by leaves
  or sage softly rolling
  from light midday breeze

Hard unfiltered sun
  in black parking lot
  makes sweat run like rivers
  its so stinking hot

The scurry of squirrel
  the flash of a deer
  if careful and stealthy
  both can be seen here

The slink of a housecat
  grey blur of a rat
  most you can hope for
  when town's where you're at 

With all of these choices
  I think you'd concur
  to live in the country
  is what I prefer
— scribbler, Jun 01, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Critiques

Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Scribbler

Country girl I am and my heart will always be thanks for the walk I enjoyed it ... tight rhyme and rhythm niceeeee lol love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
S

scribbler

16 years ago

choice

thank you .good to have you back.....scribbler
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years ago

Quite a contrast,

you have achieved with your words, the country sounds best. Great images and very well written. Regards Roscoe...
S

scribbler

16 years ago

dhoices

thanks Roscoe.Tried a little minimalism for a change......scribbler
M

magics02

16 years ago

Hey Scribe

Wow this one very well written, almost like a song to me. The flow of words was excellent, not anything out of order and just enjoyed the read as usual today. Will be back for a take at it again. Very nice Mona xoxox
S

scribbler

16 years ago

choices

tried the "LESS IS MORE' approach for a change.thanks for continuing reading and critiques.I can always count on you for a good "proof read" HA!HA! your friend.....scribbler
M

magics02

16 years ago

What I really

needed to tell you was the short is good and did not leave out anything, shorter is better and when you can round it all up and let it flow that way it makes it a more profound read. I just have a wee question and what is the intent of the indentation on the format. It looks good however I just wondered since I see you do indent, As do not take that as a bad comment but take it all in stride, my scribe friend. You are doing really progress here with your poetry and I still commend you for it. After all your comments of how good the poem is I see no Nom so I say this is worthy of a Nom for sure so I voted you in. (I see you smiling now) Have a great day Bravo Now I would like to hear this as a spoken word or song. Are you up for the challenge now? I know you can do it. Smile and Mona smiles back at ya!
S

scribbler

16 years ago

choices

thank you so much, Mona.I just use indents to signify new verse,nothing special.Don't know how to do spoken;thought it was reserved for disabled....Stan