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Jun 01, 2010
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Rules of Thumb
Watermelon underwear
adorns a lonely head
can't save face
and can't erase
all the bullshit that was said.
~
20-20 news reels
won't focus worth a damn
the plot that's used
left unexcused
eliminates each fan.
~
Sever all your retarted ties
he's so not into you
a heart that's died
can't be denied
might be that it's your cue.
~
It never will be easy
keep your cards close to the vest
put away your cross
start hitting the sauce
can't beat 'em, so join the rest !
adorns a lonely head
can't save face
and can't erase
all the bullshit that was said.
~
20-20 news reels
won't focus worth a damn
the plot that's used
left unexcused
eliminates each fan.
~
Sever all your retarted ties
he's so not into you
a heart that's died
can't be denied
might be that it's your cue.
~
It never will be easy
keep your cards close to the vest
put away your cross
start hitting the sauce
can't beat 'em, so join the rest !
— docmaverick, Jun 01, 2010
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Critiques
Antoinette Mar…
16 years ago
good subject....