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Fate Vs. Will

 The third fate wanders in the red-fisted forest.
Far away, her sisters wail
and send up screams like tearing cloth,
but she does not listen.
She carries a swaddled star
and hisses,
"Lover, lover, this is yours."

God mistakes the grasping branches for hands,
and touches them as he passes,
His belly is round with ball lightning,
and he whispers,
"Lover, lover, this is yours, this is yours."

They glimpse each other through treesand cry war.

The third fate eats God's trail of breadcumbs,
and he tangles her rolling thread.
They perch pulses on their wrists
and set them free to search.
Find him, they urge, find him.

Flesh-bound and graceless,
God stumbles over a heaving root and rests a moment.
Glancing into leaves,
he sees a heavy piece of fruit that twists
and show its worm.
It is his beloved,
of the apple-red hair and the ripe eyes.

God takes his slack left hand
and presses it against his stomach.
The blue kick jolts the father,
who trembles and looks alive.
The ball lightning drops,
and God's fluid mosaic face
crumbles.
The flood will break soon.

He hears footsteps,
and then the sound of ripping rags.
"Oh Judas,
Judas.....
when they find you, 
they will say you belonged to her,"

God grieves and cuts the rope.
— Diatom Shells, Jun 01, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

Your beauty both in flesh

Your beauty both in flesh and poetry, gorgeous as usual, is a sight for sore I's... ~ "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
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Dalton

16 years ago

a pleasure to find a new

a pleasure to find a new poem of yours. they seem to possess a marvellous narative/story like quality. and the greatest gift you have is your originality. noone write like you. I love all I have read of you. john
whitetea

whitetea

16 years ago

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There is a savage, and pointedly charming quality to your writing. I enjoy and learn from it.
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Shells

Anna's comment made me remember the quote beauty is made flesh, i dont know where it comes from but it just popped out I am going to come back to this one in a couple of days I have a couple of small tweaks but thats it Shells you always inspire me and I miss your poetry and your bright beautiful self ... hurry back love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years ago

golden egg with filigree threads that lead ones mind to many mos

The raw truth is that I am so very glad to have chanced upon this brilliant work, so VERY worthy of spotlight in a rare speedy visit here on Neo... I drank this wonderfully fecund poem & feel sated & relieved. So much depth & substance in this write shells, it will be one I would be pleased to find any time. A lovely gift for us, a golden egg with filigree threads that lead ones mind to many most worthy places... thank you. I love you for it! Cheers Anni~ "Three passions have governed my life: The longings for love, the search for knowledge, And unbearable pity for the suffering of [humankind]." Bertrand Russell
loved

loved

16 years ago

GORGEOUS....

Gorgeous... In looks and poetic ability, It’s a long time since I read Such illustrative poetry Perhaps I was sleeping Or else you were hiding In between the bushes, Where hands of God rarely reach, Amongst roses and thorns That surrounded me. Lovely poetry, Lovely poetry, Lovely poetry
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Shells

Just want to add how happy I am to see this in spotlight ... as Anni says its very worthy and from me its one of the best ive read in an age your missed love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

I commented on this but I cannot see it! Sorry

Ann of Norway Nice to see you Diatom Shells You spread the table with rich fruits and ornaments and the opulence of the atmosphere bristles with excitement and expectation, until you crush the shell's dream into a thousand fragments and reveal the truth. A fine drama and if we get these coming we will wait as long as you wish, we love it when it comes. Love from Ann
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whitescatter

15 years 11 months ago

great work…it is important

great work...it is important that in writing you have something that connects the readers with what your work is trying to imply or mean.. gratitude for that.. always take care^^ "i'm the kind of poet who likes to revolutionize poetry.trying to put the usual and unusual in the same mix.." i want to hear from you! read my works and drop your comments there..thanks.. Here... Jasfer Kerguelen "THE MOCKINGBIRD"