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…but you were not there

…but you were not there I called to express my feelings for youThe feedback flashed, was a no replyRoses and goodwill messages, forwardedWith steps guarded to your homeBut you were not there, not a noticeSo I stood at a crossroad for your return At the intersection with seven roadsOnce stood a tall African oil bean treeInterlocked with the flames of the forestRadiant red flowers shimmering in the sunShading waiting lonely tired men in loveBefore the city council came and cut them off I looked down the roads as I basked in the heatGlittering images, like the highway mirageMoved backward with every step I tookYour mocking laughter echoed in my earsSo, I imagined you in my arms, consolinglyBut you were not there, delusion had its course.



— t. reflexion, Jun 01, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Deep... T.Ref

I love it. This can mean so many things. Take the wrong road and you can find yourself having to travel down many roads to find the right path in life. Xena
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

Thank you

I am happy you love it, thus taking away the lonely air around. For the comments and time, thank you and best wishes. T.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years ago

Only when...

the pen takes the pains and sorrows to paper, then the words become your companion. Thank you for the time and for the comments. Best wishes. T.