Young Ripper In Love

This is so atmospheric...I really enjoyed reading it! Ells x

Fabulous write...great flow...I love it. Xena

i'm not a great lover of the dark write, simply because i think so few can really do the genre justice...reading some dark writes is like reading 'dark writes for dummies'... i get it, i get...no need to pound me over the head with the bleeding obvious! this however, has a restraint about the descriptors that works so much better than any in-your-face phrasing the imagery is clear, through well written lines, and the macarbe edge is definitely felt deliciously creepy last 6 lines? terrific cheers p

OHHHHHH CAT~!!!!!!!! ... simply superb poem eddy never disappoints I thought that this is really ? one of your best Brava nominated love Jayne-Chloe ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

cat be proud - 'As he scrawled his name Upon the tender Recesses of her heart' - love it (if that's the right phrase for a description of something so dark?) love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

Cat, another dark and twisted tale of the elusive Mr Styx. I was grabbed by the write with the opening line and fell in love with these lines: With the dedicated pressure Of his stainless steel blade Coaxing tiny fluid beads Of dark red berries To surface on the perfect thin line He had traced On her flawless throat I could feel it, I could see it, I was there. You managed to not just open up the page with your write, but allow the reader to become suffocated in the atmosphere and darkness. Phew! I will read this one many times over. Oh yeah, I liked it! I bow to Eddy and his evilness. A title alternative...'Love-Art' HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

I love your dark poems! This one really stands out. Gave me chills. Greeneyes

hi this is awesome and the tension i felt in this is so apt and i felt it all i read this many times over and it just gets better and better its flawless nothing I would change and my fav lines " answering the temptation with the dedicated pressure of his stainless steel blade " eddy this is brill ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,zigs x

As you well know I love the way Styx writes in fact he and Isis should get together again I cannot say anymore than has already been said. This is flawless as far as I can see love ya Chrys

Golden lady someday when you have time I would like to know more of this Eddy ego. You can pm me and tell me if you like as I have been out of the dark with this one and hear of it often here. I am interested on your take of this Eddy guy. LOL Hope you are doing well and I just love Poe's kitty looking so pretty at the camera. Talk to you soon Love,Mona xoxox

better late than never, You are a true poetess you put fire in my soul, soon i am going to write a comedy poem so you can scare your cat! so much love to you.. shirley harrison

Oh Eddy! I've missed you! ;) Nothing to critique, you two! Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe "If technique is of no interest to a writer, I doubt that the writer is an artist." -Marianne Moore