Who is better

WhO iS bETTer

All men like it standing
While women like it lying
And
I tell no lies
Men stand
Holding
In hand
Women can't...

So they simply
Imagine
All is in their,
If lucky...
Satisfying orgasm
Yet no woman has won
A NOBEL yet
Coz they all are
Novel

— loved, Jun 01, 2010

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Critiques

mantiscepter

16 years 1 month ago

Nobel Winner

Sounds like a [ featured attraction] Four star rating. COMING SOON!!! nice write: John Mantiscepter

loved

16 years 1 month ago

you are great

For a four star rated poem You give five stars For encouragement!!! Wait and see! When I’m no more And Neopoet Doesn’t play a tsunami I will be in line For the sought after one When I’m none Call it novel Or Nobel any one... Thanks for reading me MY Regards to thee...

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Ahhhh but without the

Ahhhh but without the mothers of those men ... those men wouldnt be ... the conundrum of it all ;) lol love JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

loved

16 years 1 month ago

THANKS

..for ur acceptance

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Tut Tut Loved?

Difficult to comment on this one. But I have to agree with JayCee's comment. Xena

loved

16 years 1 month ago

be thyself lady

Have your say Say what you want to I am an open book And Glad to accept What anyone would give Or want to Your independence is needed Most gracefully You know it too What I say... I always have A broad heart Of humanity I’m an integral part...

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