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Alice Ember
Alice Ember
Jun 01, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Baby sister hold on

Don't know what to do as mama takes you away in a hurry You were screaming in bitter agony All I could do was fight my tears and hold you shaking hand I'm sorry, baby sister I don't know what is wrong with you Just hold on the doctor will come he will make you better I promise you now that you'll be all right and though I have to leave your side I'll be here when you call Just stay put don't go I need you hold on, baby sister The call comes I begin to cry I hear your scream of raw agony and I'm running Please hold on Big sisters coming please don't go I'M COMING
— Alice Ember, Jun 01, 2010

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years ago

Thank you

Thank you very much mona. We are called irish twins she's my other half my whole life. I love her and need her here with me. Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Alice

Very loving and loyal...I love it as I have a wee sister that I love very much too. Xena
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years ago

thank you

thank you so much. I guess you know how i feel. wanting to take all her pain Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years ago

Thanks

It was a rough day i just needed to yell alittle glad you liked it. Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
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hippiepoet69

15 years 11 months ago

Raw emotions

Well written. I had 5 older siblings and 4 younger ones. But none as close as you have with a twin. My hearts goes out toyou. I hope she is a lot better now. Take care Alice. May your Irish eyes shine forever. huey
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks Huey

Family is family. Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to