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Alice Ember
Alice Ember
Jun 01, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Baby sister hold on

Don't know what to do as mama takes you away in a hurry You were screaming in bitter agony All I could do was fight my tears and hold you shaking hand I'm sorry, baby sister I don't know what is wrong with you Just hold on the doctor will come he will make you better I promise you now that you'll be all right and though I have to leave your side I'll be here when you call Just stay put don't go I need you hold on, baby sister The call comes I begin to cry I hear your scream of raw agony and I'm running Please hold on Big sisters coming please don't go I'M COMING
— Alice Ember, Jun 01, 2010
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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you

Thank you very much mona. We are called irish twins she's my other half my whole life. I love her and need her here with me. Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Alice

Very loving and loyal...I love it as I have a wee sister that I love very much too. Xena
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 1 month ago

thank you

thank you so much. I guess you know how i feel. wanting to take all her pain Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks

It was a rough day i just needed to yell alittle glad you liked it. Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Raw emotions

Well written. I had 5 older siblings and 4 younger ones. But none as close as you have with a twin. My hearts goes out toyou. I hope she is a lot better now. Take care Alice. May your Irish eyes shine forever. huey
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 1 month ago

Thanks Huey

Family is family. Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to

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