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May 31, 2010
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OUR JOURNEY
In loving you I had no choice
when first I heard your happy voice
and saw the sparkle of green eyes
love took me by complete surprise
So since that sunny summer day
when love came as such a shock
none else has made me feel this way
you've anchored me like solid rock
Our journey's had both ups and downs
with many laughs and many frowns
and though we've stumbled oft' enough
we've persevered when times were rough
Now that you've shared with me this path
through twists and turns toward setting sun
and helped me find an easy laugh
in evenings when the day is done
Come with me now, it's not too far
for journey's end's almost in sight
homelights guide us like northern star
toward warm hearth and restful night
when first I heard your happy voice
and saw the sparkle of green eyes
love took me by complete surprise
So since that sunny summer day
when love came as such a shock
none else has made me feel this way
you've anchored me like solid rock
Our journey's had both ups and downs
with many laughs and many frowns
and though we've stumbled oft' enough
we've persevered when times were rough
Now that you've shared with me this path
through twists and turns toward setting sun
and helped me find an easy laugh
in evenings when the day is done
Come with me now, it's not too far
for journey's end's almost in sight
homelights guide us like northern star
toward warm hearth and restful night
— scribbler, May 31, 2010
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Critiques
Bonitaj
16 years ago
Journey's beginning or end...
scribbler
16 years ago
journey
BrightEyed
16 years ago
beautiful
scribbler
16 years ago
journey
xena465
16 years ago
Hi Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
journey
judyanne
16 years ago
i love this scribbler
scribbler
16 years ago
journey