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the_fool
the_fool
May 31, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

simply footprints uphill

            horizon 
              l  l 
    the
     \
                      fix
                       /
    and
      \
                      page
                        /

    the
      \
                        of
                        /
    top
      \
                       the
                        /
    to
     \
                      way
                         /
    my
     \
                      make
                         /
   must
       \
                        i
                        /
— the_fool, May 31, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

stnemmoc?Things that make ya

stnemmoc? Things that make ya go hmmmmmmmmmm. Just don't get a paper cut. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
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magics02

16 years ago

Very Clever

I really like your tumble upwards motion of this poem. Good job here!! Mona