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May 31, 2010
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youth
GYRATING limbs in our one ness ,
hollow and blank are our eyes ,
tomorrow is an illusion ,
today is the end,
hands reach out to nothing in particular,
but expect someone to respond ,
delluded and disappoint with the way the world works ,
recklesssex,sniffing drugs ,
our only form of retaliation ,
parents will cry disapointment,
oh what is to become of our future?,
they've forgotten that we are the products of our environment.
the copy machines of their actions.
hollow and blank are our eyes ,
tomorrow is an illusion ,
today is the end,
hands reach out to nothing in particular,
but expect someone to respond ,
delluded and disappoint with the way the world works ,
recklesssex,sniffing drugs ,
our only form of retaliation ,
parents will cry disapointment,
oh what is to become of our future?,
they've forgotten that we are the products of our environment.
the copy machines of their actions.
— Thulisile, May 31, 2010
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lou
16 years ago
Depressing
Thulisile
16 years ago
AND I wish I WAS DEFFERENT.