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Highway Jack / Hades
Part one
Jack began life without a name
wailing babe upon the poor house steps
survived to adulthood on grool and thievery
One night while fleeing the scene
of his latest robbery
he hitched stagecoach ride to doom
On that fatal journey
dark Viola seduced him
took him in fond embrace
sunk her teeth into youthful vein
The pounding of hooves receded
his heart rate diminished
hallucinations of loves lost
torture he cried out in vain
Transfusion found at Viola's breast
the world rushed in
to the rhythm of the Stagecoach wheels
bloodless human husk remained
Merciless vampire lovers
on the rampage
created carnage
far and wide
Passer by loses life
Jack aquires a steed
by the name of Hades
Unholy allience
horseman and equine
Then one fateful night
Stagecoach held at musket point
past and true self collide
AVERY MUCH A WORK IN PROGRESS ,( I PLAN TO WRITE A THREE PART ,SERIES OF POEMS ABOUT THE VAMPIRE HIGHWAYMAN, OF WHICH THIS THE FIRST AND SECOND)
Part 2
Apparition upon the brow of a hill
ebony stallion, nostrils flaring
hooves sparking off each stone
Stagecoach races to it’s destination
driver shivering with dread
eyes scouring the horizon
A roar explodes from the Hades’ chest
piercing whinny rends the air
thunderous hooves clash
Pillage and annihilation
godforsaken stagecoach
on bleak highway
Viola voults atop the nag
wraps her arms about ,Highway Jack
onto the next coach stop
Critiques
xena465
16 years ago
Dear Lou
lou
16 years ago
thanks
Geezer
16 years ago
Vampire Highwayman...
lou
16 years ago
vampire highwayman
hobo
16 years ago
wanting more
lou
16 years ago
Hi
Dalton
16 years ago
Dear Lou
lou
16 years ago
Dear John