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Sweet Tooth

You smell like candy girl
I wanna taste your sugar
I wanna wet that sticky spot
show you how hot you are

Re-introduce your life
to its sexual side,
take ya where only we can go.
I wanna show ya how pretty,
you'd be without any,
inhibitions... and all those clothes.

One look at your skin
and I'm there till the end,
never stopping or letting go.
When you look in my eyes,
you'll see the me I can't hide,
lickin candy... to the bone.

C'mon lets quiver
I wanna make you shiver,
from the passion deep inside.
I wanna shake that place,
bounce the jello and the plate,
I wanna hear your let-go-sighs,

I need some candy girl tonight.
— themoonman, May 30, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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themoonman

themoonman

16 years ago

Hi Annie...

Didn't you edit your comment? I believe there was something here about my heart rate which was not only funny, but very true as I am an old man... I still enjoy the ride though. thanks Richard
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Arrow

16 years ago

*Smile*

Funny and raunchy--that's the best combination. My only thought is to reorganize the last line so it flows a little easier. Maybe, Girl, I need some candy tonight. This beats R. Kelly's You Remind Me of Something (My Jeep) by a mile!
themoonman

themoonman

16 years ago

Arrow...

I totally agree with your suggestion, well, I might word it yet differently, but totally agree it does need it. R. Kelly... damn, he is making the big bucks... thanks Richard
themoonman

themoonman

16 years ago

Julie...

Yes, a good hot sexy night is needed periodically... watch out hubby (lol) thanks Julie Richard
loved

loved

16 years ago

ur not old

...... You ain’t so At your age People just learn The art of licking, Yes that... And Sweetest candy Ere one proves, To be finally randy And Upon the virgin beaches So sandy Sorry I didn't know what your position was when i brushed with u and arrogance I did show LOVED AND LOVELY
Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

Cramps in the tongue!...

Only a man of age, could write of licking to the bone. Youngsters don't have that kind of patience! A couple of licks, and crunch, they bite! LOL. Nice write, and kind of humorous. ~ Gee
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Richard

Steaming hot write ... damn it man your sending all the women into a frenzy, rated; too hot to handle lol loved it bravo cant see much i would change but I will come back later as I always do lol love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Hot & Nice

This was hot. Really hot. Nice work. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~