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Orphani
May 29, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

photos to follow bravely

what is well in the wild?
these stifling enclosures that surround
the sentient absolutions
I discharge the errant efficiencies
kitchen floors are not for fucking
and we laughed

we snaked out the sewers
and other obstacles
I never loved you more
your ass pressed against the checkerboard
vinyl tiles alive together
photos to follow bravely.



— Orphani, May 29, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

Ann of NorwayOH Let me see,

Ann of Norway OH Let me see, let me see those photo's!!!!!! Wow Barry you wheel barrow us around your anatomical plummage and shocking disclosures of sensitive-to-light ...minds! We are the people., the poets who can see what others cannot what? Love to you(pl) sister, brother happy if you are happy is Ann.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years ago

I get the picture...

Into the kitchen for a midnight snack, that turns into a passionate embrace, and the stomach is forgotten. The checkerboard bumped off the table, and the coolness of the tile floor, fails to damp the fire and cool the ardor.
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear B

brilliant raw poetry I loved it sorry I missed it till now love and hugs JC ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")