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the streaming presence of Seth

there is a soliloquy.....

imagine if you will,
an omniscient god
beneath the falling leaves
dreaming of awakening,
splendid in the elongated light,
a  druid dancer
taking root and wing,
in the stream the loneliest life:
a shamanic journey
inside the museum of time,
an open invitation

we walk through the
gates of Paradise empty-handed
speak with sensuous
fingertips,
shhhhh!
what do you hear echoing in
the chamber of your heart?

the cosmos bears witness
we will never pass this way again.

















— Kailashana, May 29, 2010

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lou

lou

16 years ago

Spiritual

Very spiritual, I like the lines 'we walk through the gates of paradise empty handed, speak with sensuous fingertips.' Nice job. love louxx
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

Going nowhere up, nowhere down, going nowhere at all.

Ann of Norway "dreaming of awakening, splendid in the elongated light, a druid dancer taking root and wing," Longer and longer until root and wing become one, going nowhere up, nowhere down, going nowhere at all. A fascinating poem Anna from Ann X