Minds Eye Orchard

Interesting poem, flows well. lou xx

this ones touching on the profound like where your headed well done nice to read you again been a little under the weather love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

I loved your rhyme structure, it was smooth and unlaboured if you catch my drift. it rolled off the tongue very well, i think it is much harder to produce a good piece of rhymed verse than free verse, you can do what you like with freeverse and you won't destroy the pattern but rhymed verse can be much more restrictive, you have made a perfect rhyming poem. and yes like the others said it is also profound, something I must read a few times to get the whole meaning. thanks, john

another point the title was excelent it caught my eye, and the reason i wanted to read this one first of all your poems. great work, john