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hobo
hobo
May 29, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Life Sucks

Alarm clock
I’m up
Tinkle tinkle
Coffee cup
Hot shower
Brush teeth
Pop tart
Find keys
Start car
Need gas
Kinda pissed
Hate that
Running late
What’s new
Boss mad
I’m screwed
Working hard
Sort of
Can’t wait
Really bored
Back home
TV dinner
Surf web
Hit bed

Life sucks

— hobo, May 29, 2010

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hobo

hobo

16 years ago

what a day

Life two words at a time lol. sometimes it feels like this for me. hope you like it Randy
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Tee he, he, Randy

I'm used to calling you Hobo! This is fab. I love poems like this because they represent the real world...My wonderful wee pal...this is so great. Rosina xena465
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

its coming

The romance is coming my friend. I am glad you like my romance poems, it means a lot coming from someone who is a master at writting such beautiful romantic poems
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

hobo works

hobo works good for me my friend, its who I want to be haha. I am glad you like my work my friend. thank you so much
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Randy/Hobo lol ;)

I loved this I remember two word days lol yes ok and no way lol love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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scribbler

16 years ago

life sucks

Mel Brooks' movie title ? I swear there are days when all I have time for is one word.ha!ha! hectic poem to describe hectic days.....scribbler
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poewriter58

16 years ago

Randy

This is not a life. Each task sounded like it has been done over and over day after day. I felt the tiredness and drudgery of each Your use of short abrupt sentences brought this out and punctuated each task Chrys