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A Close Collect Call

When all of our days
are sunny, ridge gardens

and our nights
weave a tapestry of comfort through our veins;

and "folly" whispers in our ears at nauseum,
'tis then, we'll tragically lose sight of the rainbow.

Shame that it is
we become desensitized.

~

Then gravity
begins pulling with, "angst"

and the atmosphere
becomes so dense, and dank...that momentum soon becomes a "lost art form";

that's when it's apparent we've lost "sight"
my touchstone is the most important person in my life,

and deserves to know
just how sincere my apology is.

~

My minutes
began lasting much longer

and my total hours
led me through a labyrinth of discomfort, and pain;

as complex as our own solar system
and tellingly vague as, discerning which side is the dark side of the moon

but, at least know I didn't lose sight of you
I merely lost sight of me. 
— docmaverick, May 29, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Antoinette Mar…

16 years ago

On Collect calls....even close ones...

there may be times when the lines are busy...and we can't always get through....thats what happens to "Touchstones" at times....but they never lose sight of one another...you will always be there for me...and I, will always be there for you..........even after the lines go down in a complex solar system..there WE will be. Enjoyed this write so much that I will file it in my "Special " file. Thank you my son.......................Antoinette Mari...