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Curtain Call

Looking back through smoky scenes
that never played to sellout crowds,
my stoic denial of all but disgust
for war-time performances sickens me

and so I urge myself to swallow
that bitter dose of truth, which,
accompanied by logic, sets free
the knowledge that I liked it

familiar smells return to thrill me
and forgotten sounds echo again,
causing me to wonder
which is real, then or now?

my willing brain re-sets the stage
for long-dead actors to play once more
those roles which earned them nothing
but pain, death, and bad press

and I want to scream at critics
that opinions change, though they may not,
for across a new, American conscience,
I hear words which make this player proud

C.  Lon  R.  Bruso
— Lonnie, May 29, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: New England, originally, now, Macon, N.C., USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, Bob Dylan

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Seren

16 years ago

Dear Lonnie

I know you served your country but I dont know which conflict ... from this write I think its the Vietnam war you speak about if I am wrong i apologise still A brilliant write ... and insight into the mind of someone whos lived the hell of war thanks for sharing and educating me for you do you know my family rarely talked of war, any of those that seen a campaign anyway love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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Lonnie

16 years ago

Thank you, JayCee!

Yes, it was Vietnam! I was in the US Army from 1964 until 1971 and served in Vietnam in 1968-69. Rough years, you might say! Thank you for coming by and commenting!
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poewriter58

16 years ago

Lon

Your last line seems to fall short, or perhaps it is just I that is falling short I witness first hand the destruction war does on those that serve, so I understand this write Deep and sorrowful. Love ya Me