On Paper

I know this feeling so well, sometimes I wish I could be somewhere else or be someone else...lovely Cat. One wee typo...I know it probably doesn't matter, but just in case... be [unraveled} ……[unravelled] Rosina xena465

Good morning :) smile ... loved your poem hun it brushes the profound ... I cant find fault bravo love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Cat, I am not sure if I am just a little slow today or what, but it took me three reads to understand this write and when it hit me, it threw me off my feet (not physically!) This is a deep write and actually made me stop in my tracks to understand that I feel this way too. I wasn't sure it needed to be broken up into stanza's...it works well as one stanza (in my humble opinion) Favourite stanza: my sanity is in question as I try to write the disconcerting out of my subconscious I can feel your anguish at losing your sanity. As for the title...how about 'Mind Fuck!' Good solid write, great emotion, awesome imagery...and a little close to home for some of us (that's a good point by the way) regards, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

we must all comment even on stalwarts poetry as urs wouldn't u agree so please spread it Appreciate and comment Then no poet nor writer Can lament A comment uplifts the whole It helps the poet To raise his soul Above the clouds About to drain Let him soar high Ere it upon him does rain And his poetry forever does Wet remain loved and lovely www.triond.com lovelyhoney

There nothing I can find fault with in this poem. All of the compliments have been said and I am left without words. This hits so very close it is scary. The title hmmm if you don't like it change it but it is good as is Chrys

Wow Wee I could not love this anymore. it is like you peeked into my brain and saw what I was thinking. I espically like these lines On Paper I seek to solve that which cannot be unravelled the conundrum takes over my mind completely I am stuck on the issues surrounding the puzzle at hand there are loose threads all about the problem and I try to focus on one I must weave these thoughts back into their proper place some of them burst into flame as I do reach I see this ball of ideas as gigantic threatening to over-power my sanity is in question as I try to write the disconcerting out of my subconscious That is to say I like every single word in this. this is art my friend, this is art

That is just how I feel sometimes, beautiful.

so just love the last stanza love to you cat and healing love to your knee and heart hugs judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html