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May 28, 2010
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Never Again
Sitting in chairs
All in a row
Like ducks at a shooting gallery
Each one of us hoping
It will all be over soon
You hear a child
Screaming in the background
With such pain
And horror
In her little voice
For what seems like forever
You wonder
What could cause such pain
For such a little dove like her
I hope and pray
That I never have to go back
To the laundry mat
— hobo, May 28, 2010
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hobo
16 years 1 month ago
Never Again
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
LOL I had to giggle at this
poewriter58
16 years 1 month ago
Randy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi randy
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Hobo
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Randy
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Talk about a piece close to
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
never again
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Romantic friend
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