Every Inch

Your eyes leave me weak
I melt under their heat

When you smile
the universe dims around you

I worship every scrap, every inch
there’s nothing I could deny you

The dimple on your chin
Just caves me in

The curl of your lips
makes me weep

Muscular shoulders to hirsute chest
let me explore you

From the power in your biceps
to the fine golden hair upon your forearms

Splendid orbs of plump deliciousness
form your perfect arse

Your manhood stands the test

I adore you

— lou, May 28, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Critiques

xena465

16 years ago

He, he, he, Lou

Five extra stars for these lines...***** Splendid orbs of plump deliciousness form your perfect arse I love it...tee he! Rosina xena465

lou

16 years ago

I agree with Rosina, really

I agree with Rosina, really good write and a tribute to who ever you wrote about. Love Mand xxxxx

lou

16 years ago

I have to be the party pooper and I hate doing that ... but I felt there were too many I adore you's and the last one was overkill when you already had it said before the last lines ... I thought the I adore you's in the beginning of the poem ? could be changed and save the I adore you for the last line i believe it would give it more punch ... hope you dont mind Lou I just know this can be great poem I think its great now and could be awesome with a tweak or two love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

lou

16 years ago

Dear Jayne

You were right , thanks for the advice. love lou xx

hobo

16 years ago

Well

Well since there was no name mentioned I am going to assume this is written for me hahaha. sorry I couldn't resist. very hot read my romantic friend

lou

16 years ago

Haha

It's not about you your a married man lol Thanks love lou xx

scribbler

16 years ago

every inch

sounds like someone had a good night. ha!ha! hot verse but I agree with Seren.There are too many words to overuse any one.Just an opinion......scribbler

lou

16 years ago