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Love Reigns

Dusk still,
Sky red,
Blue shadows,
On flower beds,
Flickering flames,
Embers aglow,
Light up the dark,
Like the soul.

Silver clouds,
Soft and slight,
Moon bathes us,
In her light,
Stars wink,
You blush,
I smile,
Then flush.

Grass moist,
With dew,
But all I feel,
Is you,
Warm and humid,
Soft rose,
My darling's mouth,
Beautiful to behold.

Mind spins,
Spirit quakes,
Heart pounds,
Body shakes,
Dawn Breaks,
Night wanes,
Kisses sweet,
Love reigns.
 

— shane, May 28, 2010

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years ago

Personally,

i think it's great as it is, a lovely poem that just bounces along. Regards Roscoe...
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

I second that

I Love the way it just flows all the way...a great write Shane. Rosina xena465
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years ago

rhythm

I really enjoyed this write, staccato rhythm almost like being on a train. Short lines very effective. Well done. Ian
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shane

16 years ago

Thank You

Thank you all for taking the time to comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I learn something from every comment I recieve. Thank you again