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languish in dandylion courage
the filter white line

dust sifting in sublte eavetrough

tilt the neck
and the liquid trickle
like magic

hold out your glass
the palsy nerve ragged
sitting in the chair
dark as a burnt roast

thunder collapses
and voices clap
off building serenity

the black skinny dog
trots past
head down
whinning

the storm close
like a freind
breathing
in dream twitch spasms

this silver chain
dangling like a thread of love
each link a heartbeat
each heartbeat a song

and the darkness crumbles
and you say okay
with wet lips
red with fortified bullshit
tainted with its nothingness

you laugh and the television
is a blur of static wandering

a plate of spaghetti is a host
of flies

and the split flash
speaks
in its hunger

— Esker, May 27, 2010

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Esker

Esker

16 years ago

surreal lost

clip random the freight runs on the bridge like black knots the river face wide and passioned with sunset the storm walks over us humming in the wires and we drink like thirsty diggers and the flies buzz happily
CS

club special

16 years ago

Keep up the great work

Thunder collapses, and voices clap, off building serenity-- You have got some poetry here-- refreshing after sifting through all the, ah, other poems from other people on this site?-- Club Special
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

I love it Esker

Well written and witty. I enjoyed reading this. A few wee typos.... languish in {dandylion} courage …………[dandelion] dust sifting in {sublte} {eavetrough} …………[subtle] … [eave trough] {whinning} ……[whining] like a {freind} ……..[friend] Rosina xena465