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May 27, 2010
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SHIFT SUBURB
languish in dandylion courage
the filter white line
dust sifting in sublte eavetrough
tilt the neck
and the liquid trickle
like magic
hold out your glass
the palsy nerve ragged
sitting in the chair
dark as a burnt roast
thunder collapses
and voices clap
off building serenity
the black skinny dog
trots past
head down
whinning
the storm close
like a freind
breathing
in dream twitch spasms
this silver chain
dangling like a thread of love
each link a heartbeat
each heartbeat a song
and the darkness crumbles
and you say okay
with wet lips
red with fortified bullshit
tainted with its nothingness
you laugh and the television
is a blur of static wandering
a plate of spaghetti is a host
of flies
and the split flash
speaks
in its hunger
— Esker, May 27, 2010
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Esker
16 years ago
surreal lost
club special
16 years ago
Keep up the great work
xena465
16 years ago
I love it Esker