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RED FLOODS
When issues red descend,
alarm gives cause to qualm and fear,
unwittingly we quake,
our mental state is weakened,
we hope its fake, not real,
and yet on seeing red, we dread the consequences,
feel the weight of troubles physical, found out,
before it is too late to treat,
restore the balance, take out the bad,
the things that grow abnormally,
they scare.
We think of others dying, of beginnings just like this,
it spouts the bliss of happiness
and taints the mind with pains and worry,
what's amiss?
Can it be cured, will it be always there,
will my life change, will all familiar become
so difficult and hard, so tough to master,
learn again to live, an invalid;
a poor, poor soul in strife, with every hour a worry
there beside the pattern of the day,
its normal chores be tackled, yet another way,
uncertainty and angst, why me?
Why you, why us,
as if we knew, we don't,
we can't,
so tackle it we must.
Critiques
yenti
16 years ago
Hi there Ann
xena465
16 years ago
Dearest Ann
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Ann
judyanne
16 years ago
so well written annanya
barbsdad2003
16 years ago
I so like/respect ...
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
WISE!!!! Me. LOL-ly pop!