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RED FLOODS

RED FLOODS




When issues red descend,

alarm gives cause to qualm and fear, 

unwittingly we quake,

our mental state is weakened,

we hope its fake, not real, 

and yet on seeing red, we dread the consequences, 

feel the weight of troubles physical, found out, 

before it is too late to treat, 

restore the balance, take out the bad, 

the things that grow abnormally, 

they scare.

 

We think of others dying, of beginnings just like this, 

it spouts the bliss of happiness

and taints the mind with pains and worry,

what's amiss?

 

Can it be cured, will it be always there, 

will my life change, will all familiar become

so difficult and hard, so tough to master, 

learn again to live, an invalid;

a poor, poor soul in strife, with every hour a worry

there beside the pattern of the day, 

its normal chores be tackled, yet another way, 

uncertainty and angst, why me?

 

Why you, why us, 

as if we knew, we don't, 

we can't,

so tackle it we must.



 

 

 


— Nordic cloud, May 27, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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yenti

yenti

16 years ago

Hi there Ann

we cannot avoid the red floods of the end zone they are written in stone but not that we will ever see the stones lol A finality to be and change and in my own belief an awakening from this crawling the Earth learning of the ways of a physical form to the unconditional love of the Spirt World, Mind you if I am wrong and there is nothing there I will not be able to be disapointed will I,??? A great write as usual your pen is true to your ways of being a great poet, Yours Ian.T
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dearest Ann

This is so true. If we can't move on from what ails us we get stuck in the past. Life is what we make it, and to give in is a weakness, but with strength for true friends it’s a step forward to getting better, like Ian said, we have to be in tune with the spirit world, which is around us if we search for it, and we can find peace within ourselves. ..wise and beautiful my dear Ann of Wisdom from Norway. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Ann

As you know you touch me deeply with your poetry and this ones no less than the others ... there is sometimes no cure, leukemia still has no cure the best I can hope for is a remission ... but living each day to its fullest is all any of us can do, take the good with the bad and hope we end up right side up love you dearheart Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

so well written annanya

i love the last stanza love and hugs to you judyanne xxx we don't understand now - that's why we need the lesson we just need to remember that everything passes, annanya, even red floods while we are forever somewhere xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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barbsdad2003

16 years ago

I so like/respect ...

your deeper knowing that shines through. Not only here, but elsewhere, in those other writings of yours. Yours, Chuck
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

WISE!!!! Me. LOL-ly pop!

Ann of Norway I do not want to be thought of as a person who is holier than thou. One who lords it over others or in any way thinks themselves above others. I am only a tiny grain of sand in the grand and magnificent wonder that is the planet earth, one of the few planets that has been lucky enough to have developed life and that one tiny grain has facets that shine as well as dull ones, sharp edges and smooth, none are perfect, or totally symmetrical and my tiny grain is only aware of a tiny part of all the knowledge we could understand; so even if I give a sense of wisdom it us a portion only, within my own limited brain culled from a sensitivity to the things of nature and the empathy and understanding of whatever quantity I have learned to perceive during my life, so look on me as an expression of my own ideas, and as such, one point of view among the many that all thinking people find and use as norms until they find better theories to replace them. It is most probable that the collective understanding is that which should be learned in order not to develop one sided bias and at worst fanaticism, as one finds in narrow-minded religious people who accept no change in their understanding. We are ever learning all our lives and should respect that norm as important to remember whenever debating the origins of existence that we have only a sketchy understanding of at best!!! Hokusai said:- From around the age of six, I had the habit of sketching from life. I became an artist, and from fifty on began producing works that won some reputation, but nothing I did before the age of seventy was worthy of attention. At seventy-three, I began to grasp the structures of birds and beasts, insects and fish, and of the way plants grow. If I go on trying, I will surely understand them still better by the time I am eighty-six, so that by ninety I will have penetrated to their essential nature. At one hundred, I may well have a positively divine understanding of them, while at one hundred and thirty, forty, or more I will have reached the stage where every dot and every stroke I paint will be alive. May Heaven, that grants long life, give me the chance to prove that this is no lie. Constantly seeking to produce better work, he apparently exclaimed on his deathbed, "If only Heaven will give me just another ten years... Just another five more years, then I could become a real painter." He died on May 10, 1849 Hokusai had the right attitude to BEING RIGHT note this, and be humbled by his WISDOM. Love to all you lovely people with minds that think and hearts that love others. Your comments are beautiful, but I still know where I stand in the sum of things. Ann XX