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May 27, 2010
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of saturdays with jam and cream
.
the sun is bright this autumn morn
yet no warmth
is carried on its rays
all around
signs of an approaching winter
the extra jumper i wear
(my fishing jumper)
offers no promise of heat.
too many holes
for the wind to whistle through
on the street
trees crackle in the crisp air.
i see the chimney smoke.
too cold to unfurl,
it lays like a sleepy lover
curled around its roof-top
the smell of pine is strong
everywhere
shoulders are hunched inside jackets
with turned up collars.
coat pockets
cradle clenched fingers
in coloured wool,
and pale faces hang
sombre
from under lowered brims
i make my way to the coffee house
the aroma of roasting beans
and freshly toasted bread
is warming,
like an open fire
the comfort of sound-
soft rustle of newspaper page turning,
muffled clatter of glass and stainless steel
in kitchen,
hiss of steam from coffee machine,
hum of conversations, and
stifled giggles
remind me
of saturdays with jam and cream.
of kohl rimmed eyes
and ruby lips.
of sitting with Victoria
watching the muted autumn
fall across her face
lending it beautiful
in the fading light
.
the sun is bright this autumn morn
yet no warmth
is carried on its rays
all around
signs of an approaching winter
the extra jumper i wear
(my fishing jumper)
offers no promise of heat.
too many holes
for the wind to whistle through
on the street
trees crackle in the crisp air.
i see the chimney smoke.
too cold to unfurl,
it lays like a sleepy lover
curled around its roof-top
the smell of pine is strong
everywhere
shoulders are hunched inside jackets
with turned up collars.
coat pockets
cradle clenched fingers
in coloured wool,
and pale faces hang
sombre
from under lowered brims
i make my way to the coffee house
the aroma of roasting beans
and freshly toasted bread
is warming,
like an open fire
the comfort of sound-
soft rustle of newspaper page turning,
muffled clatter of glass and stainless steel
in kitchen,
hiss of steam from coffee machine,
hum of conversations, and
stifled giggles
remind me
of saturdays with jam and cream.
of kohl rimmed eyes
and ruby lips.
of sitting with Victoria
watching the muted autumn
fall across her face
lending it beautiful
in the fading light
.
— pleiades, May 27, 2010
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pleiades
16 years ago
for e.thank you efor the
Seren
16 years ago
Dear P
pleiades
16 years ago
thanks seren for the
Kailashana
16 years ago
love the title, love the
pleiades
16 years ago
a little coffee house in a
scribbler
16 years ago
cream
pleiades
16 years ago
thank you scribbler glad you
Esker
16 years ago
sensual flow
pleiades
16 years ago
thank you e, for such lovely