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of saturdays with jam and cream

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the sun is bright this autumn morn
yet no warmth
is carried on its rays

all around
signs of an approaching winter

the extra jumper i wear
(my fishing jumper)
offers no promise of heat.
too many holes
for the wind to whistle through

on the street
trees crackle in the crisp air.
i see the chimney smoke.
too cold to unfurl,
it lays like a sleepy lover
curled around its roof-top

the smell of pine is strong

everywhere
shoulders are hunched inside jackets
with turned up collars.
coat pockets
cradle clenched fingers
in coloured wool,
and pale faces hang
sombre
from under lowered brims

i make my way to the coffee house

the aroma of roasting beans
and freshly toasted bread
is warming,
like an open fire

the comfort of sound-
soft rustle of newspaper page turning,
muffled clatter of glass and stainless steel
in kitchen,
hiss of steam from coffee machine,
hum of conversations, and
stifled giggles
remind me

of  saturdays with jam and cream.
of  kohl rimmed eyes
and ruby lips.

of sitting with Victoria

watching the muted autumn
fall across her face

lending it beautiful
in the fading light

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— pleiades, May 27, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear P

All I can say is wonderful ... and second line wamrth/warmth ... other than that beautiful as is becoming usual love JayCee x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

love the title, love the

love the title, love the poem, love the love you share...thank you. ~ "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
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pleiades

16 years ago

a little coffee house in a

a little coffee house in a city lane-way...'gibbys' many years ago, spent nearly every saturday there having devonshire tea with victoria victoria... blues singer staunch feminist painter writer poet lover recent converstaions with esker brought memories to the fore thank you A ~
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scribbler

16 years ago

cream

Don't know free verse, but I know what I like.Great imagery and description of approaching cold weather.Coming up on summer here.good write.......scribbler
Esker

Esker

16 years ago

sensual flow

that light the impressionists worked at it the shadowdance you have captured this image this Victoria in warmth and especially The Heart Esker~
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pleiades

16 years ago

thank you e, for such lovely

thank you e, for such lovely words... you inderstand these things of the heart victoria is still in my life she always will be some relationships are cemented from the time of meeting p