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Hope Chest

Desires of moments
that have come close to be

can be all too deceiving  
not letting us see

spirits that tremble
emotions so deep

clouding minds intentions
that wander in sleep

assumptions that give us 
paths that decline

taking thoughts once measured
leading dreams from mind

these moments held softly
you know they're the ones

searched in life's meanings
but alas to be shunned

so living these days 
we hope for their best

holding romantic lost visions
kept locked in your chest

this wooden vault
in a place we know

 our hope chest of loving
where our dreams all flow

— mantiscepter, May 27, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Gee I love this

It's so full of real meaning and feelings...great write John. I love the title. Just one wee thing I noticed.... you know {their} the ones ……[they’re or they are] Rosina xena465
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

spelling test :{

Thanks for the correction, spelling not one of my strong points, being an eighth grade drop out , so I need all the help I can get. Glad you liked it. and thanks for stopping by,and for sharing your day with me. John Mantiscepter.