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Gulag

The path moves along the ritzy car,
A cuddle bunny .  Its tits filled her.

He drove in the wings of pleasure.

Modern capitalism was floating,
Eulogising vedic culture, Christian
And Islamic admixture of luxury.

Das Capital infiltrated into religion,
A cloudy mirror of great ideas!
Emotional outbursts of Faiths.

The glass house was nice to sit in
Unless somebody throws a stone.

Haves only survive here chanting
Songs of religion, and prayer.
Shapes defoliated the trees of barrenness..

The ritzy car emits suffocating smoke.
Our leaders travel emiting venom.
Crankily they emit toxic gases.

Citizens in gulag of mirish ideology
Mourn.  Who can save them?
— U K Atiyodi, May 26, 2010

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lou

lou

16 years ago

hi

Good job, what i would say is the first stanza would work better if you said something like, 'the sleek car sped along the road, a busty cuddle bunny in tow.' lou x