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ENTRANCING TEMPTATIONS
In the light of spring and summer
when all is green and bright and new,
I get news of you before the dew has gone from leaf and path,
those sad damp patches now describe your plight,
and in the dim-lit morning
tell your message to the world
that all is not so good, so joyful;
while birds sing in the wood of coming blooms,
there are those whose minds are full of gloom,
whose pains seize their intent,
and squeeze and twist their glance away
from sweet temptations that entrance.
And while the dew drops dance their drips
on petals blue, white, yellow,
their thoughts are dull and mellow,
not inspired, retired, their senses,
feelings at an ebb
as if caught in that dew bespangled web,
a fly, so small an offering
to fates firm and powerful hand,
If only we could understand
their helpless dark depression,
not even an obsession
brought on by weakness for a drug,
but given the life we have, they have no choice
and face it, almost with a shrug.
What can we healthy beings do but smile,
to help them climb back out of their despair,
we try to help repair their sickness
offer our sweet happiness, as best we can,
and hope we make a difference, turn the sand.
Critiques
xena465
16 years ago
Wow Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
How lovely of you Rosina thank you
xena465
16 years ago
Re: Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
You make me feel very happy dear Rosina
Ravenshakti
16 years ago
Dear Ann...
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Ann
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Dearest Jayne,
Seren
16 years ago
Ann I say with the utmost