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hippiepoet69
May 25, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Love Forged

 love forged in our heartof deep emotional desireto never be aparta friendship caught on fire a friendship of emotional lustcast in our soulof devotion and trustsouls once dark as coal tempered by the tearsthat fell like rainover the yearsof pleasure and pain honed to a fine edgeby words spokenkind of a pledgeneither fulfilled nor broken love forged in our heartof a hot molten desireto never be aparta friendship caught on fire copyright   5-25-10   huey horton   (hippiepoet69) 
— hippiepoet69, May 25, 2010

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Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful

HippiePoet69, this created wonderful images and the unity and bonding of the rhyming lines mirrored the subject matter. This is beautiful. regards, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".
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hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks HS

I'm trying to improve with the help of poets like you and others. I mainly learm by reading other well written poems. Thanks for your kind words. Take Care. huey
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

Damn....

This poem took my breath away. Great job Huey. I'm going to gocatch my breath now before it flies out the window.jkjk Irish eyes Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
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hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

Dang!

It just popped into my head. I thought it would take hours for it to come together. Only one stanza gave me trouble. One line wanted to be too long. Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. For some reason I have not been able to add friends. But I'm trying to keep up with them. Take Care and keep those Irish eyes smiling. . huey
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Lovestruck

Moonstruck Hippiestruck You in a mood for love I see it coming on friend, good write kudos to you Sribe!! Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

Hollystruck

Have been for 30 years. Monday we talked about 5 hours. We can talk all day about nothing and hang on to every word. Thanks Mona. Take Care. huey
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scribbler

16 years 2 months ago

love

Most rhythm and rhyme I've seen in free verse.very descriptive ,yet concise....scribbler
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hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

Gee! Stan

I guess I can quit my day job. And live off the royalties. I'm still waiting on my check from songs I wrote years ago. I'm getting mighty hungry. Hold me to high standards and I will keep trying to improve. Take Care. huey
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Huey

Wonderful and very well written. Like Mona said "We're Hippiestruck"...great stuff. Rosina xena465
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hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Zena

You and others, too many to name inspire me to write better. Holly keeps my heart young and inspired. Take Care my friend. huey

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